diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
index b0d6386fea..ed1ab07fb1 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
Step-by-step instructions if those instructions exist in other Yocto
Project documentation.
For example, the Yocto Project Application Developer's Guide contains detailed
- instruction on how to run the
+ instructions on how to run the
Installing the ADT and Toolchains,
which is used to set up a cross-development environment.
Reference material.
@@ -96,8 +96,9 @@
Other Information
- Because this manual presents overview information for many different topics, you will
- need to supplement it with other information.
+ Because this manual presents overview information for many different
+ topics, supplemental information is recommended for full
+ comprehension.
The following list presents other sources of information you might find helpful:
Yocto Project Website:
@@ -105,7 +106,7 @@
as well as links to software and documentation.
Yocto Project Quick Start: This short document lets you get started
- with the Yocto Project quickly and start building an image.
+ with the Yocto Project and quickly begin building an image.
Yocto Project Reference Manual: This manual is a reference
guide to the OpenEmbedded build system known as "Poky."
@@ -169,7 +170,7 @@
OpenEmbedded build system (Poky).
- for a mailing list to receive official Yocto Project announcements for developments and
+ for a mailing list to receive official Yocto Project announcements
as well as Yocto Project milestones.
for a
listing of all public mailing lists on lists.yoctoproject.org.
@@ -182,7 +183,7 @@
OpenEmbedded:
The build system used by the Yocto Project.
- This project is the upstream, generic, embedded distribution from which the Yocto
+ This project is the upstream, generic, embedded distribution that the Yocto
Project derives its build system (Poky) from and to which it contributes.
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
index 719d0f3919..02f6bd0452 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
The Yocto Project is an open-source collaboration project focused on embedded Linux development.
- The project currently provides a build system, which is
+ The project currently provides a build system that is
referred to as the OpenEmbedded build system in the Yocto Project documentation.
- The Yocto Project provides various ancillary tools suitable for the embedded developer
+ The Yocto Project provides various ancillary tools for the embedded developer
and also features the Sato reference User Interface, which is optimized for
stylus driven, low-resolution screens.
diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/ref-bitbake.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/ref-bitbake.xml
index cc4c943506..717c58bd71 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/ref-bitbake.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/ref-bitbake.xml
@@ -23,8 +23,9 @@
BitBake strives to be a generic "task" executor that is capable of handling complex dependency relationships.
As such, it has no real knowledge of what the tasks being executed actually do.
- BitBake just considers a list of tasks with dependencies and handles metadata
- that consists of variables in a certain format that get passed to the tasks.
+ BitBake just considers a list of tasks with dependencies and handles
+ Metadata
+ consisting of variables in a certain format that get passed to the tasks.
diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
index d27d6f7a5e..9a98b4560a 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@
The build_dir is optional and specifies the directory the
OpenEmbedded build system uses for the build -
the Build Directory.
- If you do not specify a Build Directory, it defaults to build
- in your current working directory.
+ If you do not specify a Build Directory, it defaults to a directory
+ named build in your current working directory.
A common practice is to use a different Build Directory for different targets.
For example, ~/build/x86 for a qemux86
target, and ~/build/arm for a qemuarm target.