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@@ -761,40 +761,46 @@ repository.
- Export for External (Upstream) Submission
-
-If patches are to be sent for external submission, they can be done via a
-pull request if the patch series is large or the maintainer prefers to pull
-changes. But commonly, patches are sent as email series for easy review and
-integration.
-
-
-Before sending patches for review ensure that you understand the
-standard of the community in question and follow their best practices. For
-example, kernel patches should follow standards such as:
-
-
-
- Documentation/SubmittingPatches (in any linux kernel source tree)
-
-
-
-The messages used to commit changes are a large part of these standards, so
-ensure that the headers for each commit have the required information. If the
-initial commits were not properly documented or don't meet those standards
-rebasing via git rebase -i offer an opportunity to manipulate the commits and
-get them into the required format. Other techniques such as branching and
-cherry picking commits are also viable options.
-
-
-Once complete, patches are sent via email to the maintainer(s) or lists that
-review and integrate changes. "git send-email" is commonly used to ensure
-that patches are properly formatted for easy application and avoid mailer
-induced patch damage.
-
-
-An example of dumping patches for external submission follows:
-
+ Exporting Changes for External (Upstream) Submission
+
+
+ This section describes how to export changes for external upstream submission.
+ If the patch series is large or the maintainer prefers to pull
+ changes, you can submit these changes by using a pull request.
+ However, it is common to sent patches as an email series.
+ This method allows easy review and integration of the changes.
+
+
+
+ Before sending patches for review be sure you understand the
+ community standards for submitting and documenting changes and follow their best practices.
+ For example, kernel patches should follow standards such as:
+
+
+
+ Documentation/SubmittingPatches (in any linux kernel source tree)
+
+
+
+
+ The messages used to commit changes are a large part of these standards.
+ Consequently, be sure that the headers for each commit have the required information.
+ If the initial commits were not properly documented or do not meet those standards,
+ you can re-base by using the "git rebase -i" command to manipulate the commits and
+ get them into the required format.
+ Other techniques such as branching and cherry-picking commits are also viable options.
+
+
+
+ Once you complete the commits, you can generate the email that sends the patches
+ to the maintainer(s) or lists that review and integrate changes.
+ The command "git send-email" is commonly used to ensure that patches are properly
+ formatted for easy application and avoid mailer-induced patch damage.
+
+
+
+ The following is an example of dumping patches for external submission:
+
# dump the last 4 commits
> git format-patch --thread -n -o ~/rr/ HEAD^^^^
> git send-email --compose --subject '[RFC 0/N] <patch series summary>' \
@@ -802,88 +808,98 @@ An example of dumping patches for external submission follows:
--cc list@yoctoproject.org ~/rr
# the editor is invoked for the 0/N patch, and when complete the entire
# series is sent via email for review
-
-
+
+
- Export for Import into Other SCM
-
-Using any one of the previously discussed techniques, commits can be exported
-as patches for import into another SCM. Note however, that if those patches
-are manually applied to a secondary tree and then that secondary tree is
-checked into the SCM, then it often results in lost information (like commit
-logs) and so it is not recommended.
-
-
-Many SCMs can directly import git commits, or can translate git patches to
-not lose information. Those facilities are SCM dependent and should be used
-whenever possible.
-
+ Exporting Changes for Import into Another SCM
+
+
+ When you want to export changes for import into another
+ Source Code Manager (SCM) you can use any of the previously discussed
+ techniques.
+ However, if the patches are manually applied to a secondary tree and then
+ that tree is checked into the SCM you can lose change information such as
+ commit logs.
+ Yocto Project does not recommend this process.
+
+
+
+ Many SCMs can directly import git commits, or can translate git patches so that
+ information is not lost.
+ Those facilities are SCM-dependent and you should use them whenever possible.
+
- SCM: Working with the Yocto Project Kernel in Another SCM
-
-This is not the same as the exporting of patches to another SCM, but instead
-is concerned with kernel development that is done completely in another
-environment, but built with the Yocto Project build system. In this scenario two
-things must happen:
-
- The delivered Yocto Project kernel must be exported into the second
- SCM.
- Development must be exported from that secondary SCM into a
- format that can be used by the Yocto Project build system.
-
-
+ Working with the Yocto Project Kernel in Another SCM
+
+
+ This section describes kernel development in another SCM, which is not the same
+ as exporting changes to another SCM.
+ For this scenario you use the Yocto Project build system to
+ develop the kernel in a different SCM.
+ The following must be true for you to accomplish this:
+
+ The delivered Yocto Project kernel must be exported into the second
+ SCM.
+ Development must be exported from that secondary SCM into a
+ format that can be used by the Yocto Project build system.
+
+
+
- Exporting Delivered Kernel to SCM
-
-Depending on the SCM it may be possible to export the entire Yocto Project
-kernel git repository, branches and all, into a new environment. This is the
-preferred method, since it has the most flexibility and potential to maintain
-the meta data associated with each commit.
-
-
-When a direct import mechanism is not available, it is still possible to
-export a branch (or series of branches) and check them into a new
-repository.
-
-
-The following commands illustrate some of the steps that could be used to
-import the common_pc-standard kernel into a secondary SCM
-
+ Exporting the Delivered Kernel to the SCM
+
+
+ Depending on the SCM it might be possible to export the entire Yocto Project
+ kernel git repository, branches and all, into a new environment.
+ This method is preferred because it has the most flexibility and potential to maintain
+ the meta data associated with each commit.
+
+
+
+ When a direct import mechanism is not available, it is still possible to
+ export a branch (or series of branches) and check them into a new repository.
+
+
+
+ The following commands illustrate some of the steps you could use to
+ import the common_pc-standard kernel into a secondary SCM:
+
> git checkout common_pc-standard
> cd .. ; echo linux/.git > .cvsignore
> cvs import -m "initial import" linux MY_COMPANY start
-
-The CVS repo could now be relocated and used in a centralized manner.
-
-
-The following commands illustrate how two BSPs could be condensed and merged
-into a second SCM:
-
+
+
+
+
+ You could now relocate the CVS repository and use it in a centralized manner.
+
+
+
+ The following commands illustrate how you can condense and merge two BSPs into a second SCM:
+
> git checkout common_pc-standard
> git merge cav_ebt5800-standard
# resolve any conflicts and commit them
> cd .. ; echo linux/.git > .cvsignore
> cvs import -m "initial import" linux MY_COMPANY start
-
-
+
+
- Importing Changes for Build
-
-Once development has reached a suitable point in the second development
-environment, changes can either be exported as patches or imported into git
-directly (if a conversion/import mechanism is available for the SCM).
-
-
-If changes are exported as patches, they can be placed in a recipe and
-automatically applied to the kernel during patching.
-
+ Importing Changes for the Build
+
+
+ Once development has reached a suitable point in the second development
+ environment, you need to export the changes as patches.
+ To export them place the changes in a recipe and
+ automatically apply them to the kernel during patching.
+